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of broken time and shattered glass. Of flying and cages and open doors. Of falling pieces and nothing surrounding me, where i won't have to think, or act, or be. And i cry, for they are only dreams, and only will be.
Download for all the details. ^_^ *** EDIT EDIT: LOL redrew entire cage and added kneecaps. sorry for this old art again, if i edit again i won't show it to you guys. I don't want to bother you guys with this anymore. >.> **EDIT: tried to change legs and cage. and added some other stuff. do you think the puzzle pieces make it too busy? cause i like the pieces but.... Feel free to keep on critiquing it. ^^ Credits: Gear brushes :[link]  Bird brushes :[link]  Roman numerals: [link]  Dress pattern: [link]  Puzzle pieces (i can't remember which ones are exactly in this drawing, so i'll put all the ones i downloaded.  )[link]  [link]  [link]  I'm hesitant to ask for critiques, because almost everything in this drawing means something to me, some are metaphorical and others literal. But i do want this to be as good as possible, so tell me if there's some shading issues, coloring, ect. I'll tell you if it was meant to be that way or not.  For I dream contest [link] oh, and thank you guys so much for helping me with the lineart stage. ^^ i'm sorry i didn't reply to some of the comments, because i just deleted the deviation. Comments
 It's so pretty~
 Good luck in the contest!! --  oh 너무 부끄러워 쳐다볼 수 없어 사랑에 빠졌어 수줍은 걸 I really like your art work! i wish i could critique it, but with this account cant do an official one, so i will do one in the comment section.
This is an amazing piece of art and one of the best one's i have seen on deviant art. you could of done the cage better and seems a little awkward and seems a jagged. But other than that emotions are brought out beautifully though the piece. Can't wait to see more art from you and the best of luck.   -- Xx.....::: PrincessAri :::.....xX   This is totally completely awesome!!-- "I was having a good time until the assassins stole my pants and tried to kill me!"  I love the pattern on her dress
-- To denounce the evils of truth and love and extend our reach to the stars above   this is an amazing piece! i would totally make this into a dev ID if i were you! its that great
 -- Rejoice not at thine enemy's fall - but don't rush to pick him up either. ~Jewish Proverb HOW TO GET MORE PAGEVIEWS ---->[link]  this is pretty kick ass. No REALLY kick ass.
 This is beautiful! I love it so much! Much luck in the contest!
 I'd give critique if i knew how..but i'll just show ya some love!!! xD-- o/ Amelia Earheart flew alot of airplanes...except for that one time when she didn't come back...o/~Family Guy aw, thank you love!!
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Critiques
I like how this came out, yet I thought it would have more impact if it was a close up of her head and the shoulders came to the end of the drawing. Also if there was a black background or something dark to highlight the girl, maybe even add a glow around her to center the attention on her. Her arms hang rather limp, it should be a little more curved.
Otherwise this is a very nice drawing~
You did good job with the clock by using different brushes that mix up together. It looks really realistic.
The anatomy of the girl is really good, but the legs are too stiff looking, too straight. More shapes would've make them more natural. The face looks good and the hair is lovely, though it could be more vivid.
The cage is quite plain, I understand that it's hard to make something like it. But it looks now a bit flat.:/
Overall this is still a very nice picture, you've done great progress from the previous pictures.
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