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L eats cake

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Finally L is here! :heart: sorry about the bad hair and background.... i worked on this for so many hours....

BTW, i have NOT finished death note yet. Please please please no spoilers, just assume that all i know about death note is who L is and what he looks like, and who Kira/light is.

reference pic used. ^^
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

A Great job overall!! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="=)" title="=) (Smile)" /> L looks very happy with his mini-dessert. My favourite part (besides his cute expression) has to be the details of the shirt. The colours and folds look very natural. But somehow the colours of his left leg (our right) make it seem like it's not supposed to be part of the picture. Some improvements that I believe you could work on are... The anatomy of his hands. I know they're a pain in the butt to draw, but practise makes perfect. <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="=)" title="=) (Smile)" /> You could also do some more work on the background so they are not just solid blocks of colour. And shadows and highlights are nice but make sure you pick a light source and stick with it. <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/e/e…" width="18" height="15" alt=":eager:" title=":eager: by darkmoon3636" />